Nowadays technological devices such as smart phones, tablets bring more disadvantage than advantage.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is often thought that, comprehensive technological devices bring much more disadvantages of this development outweigh the advantages. In my opinion, this modification of technology has bought more benefits rather than its drawbacks.
On the one hand, why technological devices such as smart phone , tablets are considered disadvantageous are their damage can able to create a rang of health problems. This is an examplified by 80% of the people are consuming the amount of time to access websites in the temporary world. This action will increase to influence negative effects such as radiation and poor eyesight. More importantly, the number of people who are using them every day and a variety of social network sites are reducing face to face interaction. Last point that, whenever humans constantly replace in the internet sites without putting their hand phones, this position will able to determine from humans’ real life because of their indecency on gadgets.
On the other hand, the despite negative effects, a range of technological gadgets can have to the ability to make our life much more easier also, create convenience by getting the quality of educational and comprehensive knowledge. Nowadays, mobile phones one of the best way to keep in touch anywhere. Moreover, we can access source of informations faster rather than traditional ones. For instance, taking informations from then net become the highest benefit in the pandemic period of time. The state government limited to go to somewhere. Alternatively, this gadgets could invest one of traffic atmosphere to work definitely though did not go to the office. In this way, the number of science, teachers, students of universities could gain nacessary knowledge with the lowest cost.
In conclusion, the technologies have a strong ability to bring base of skill and the proportion of humans can find resources about what is happening in the temporary globe. Besides, in my view, humans health have to become main step in their brief lifetime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...echnological devices such as smart phone , tablets are considered disadvantageous ...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ve to the ability to make our life much more easier also, create convenience by getting the...
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Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ome the highest benefit in the pandemic period of time. The state government limited to go to ...
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Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ited to go to somewhere. Alternatively, this gadgets could invest one of traffic atm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31055900621 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97182015863 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3030391772 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175937909706 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530807378201 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743018221708 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110966269159 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702040866507 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.