It is irrefutable to say that people in most of the nations are encountering various health issue due to their unhealthy lifestyle. In this essay, I will shed light on the reasons for their adaption and solution to curb this issue.
The predominant reason is the lifestyle which current generation is living. They toil hard and burn midnight oil to achieve their never-ending desires. this further lead to problems like stress and even they do into depression which is very common these days. Thus, further this lead to different maladies, this is not seen earlier. Another reason which further encourage the people to opt unhealthy lifestyle is the technology, although technology benefits humans in many ways, yet it has some adverse effect. Due to increase in technology advancement, individual is depending more and more on technology, multiple applications are available offering different home services that’s forcing a person to sit at home. That makes a person obese, which is the main cause to ailments. So clearly these factors effecting individual health.
To crack this hardnut, one should maintain a work life balance, means he need to manage his time very well. People should finish their work in their office and send spend some quality time with their friends and family which acts like a stress buster for many and keep them mentally fit. Also, they should always spare some time to do exercise either in the morning or evening that helps them to remain physically healthy. Moreover, companies should provide the facilities like gym, fitness club, recreational activities, etcetera that help their employee to work efficiently and it gives employee an easy access to gain fitness. Along with this, a counselling session must organize will help their employee to overcome their issues. These steps will simulate a person to lead a healthy life.
To recapitulate, it has become a need of hour to overcome this issue. Individual should maintain balance in his life and always remember that health is wealth, so he should stop chasing the materialistic goal and minimize the use of technology that lead to unhealthy lifestyle.
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. 73
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. 61
- Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not doing enough physical exercises. What do you think might be the reason? What can be done to encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e in technology advancement, individual is depending more and more on technology, multiple a...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
... work efficiently and it gives employee an easy access to gain fitness. Along with this, a cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1776504298 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66538797705 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56446991404 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4716955241 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.388888889 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974996666854 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292450067708 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337990605881 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554611608474 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250605409341 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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