Some people in today's society think that tourism may help in closing cultural barriers between people of various ethnicities and civilizations.Others argue that however, tourism causes a loss of heritage.I will share my opinion in this essay.
First and foremost, there is no doubt that tourism promotes peace among people of different races, ethnic backgrounds, and cultural traditions.Visitors will know a lot about the nation they are visiting that the information can be used to solve gaps in culture.Additionally, tourism can assist the community to taking opportunities to promote itself and enhance its profile to the world.
Secondly, throughout the years, tourism fosters greater multicultural and business connections.There will be an increase in industries associated with tourism that are beneficial.Additionally, tourism may highlight a nation's potential for economic development and help big businesses to profit on its benefits.
In conclusion, tourism is today a profitable trend that links people all over the world and creates much income for each country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.75965423942 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68125 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.7602237228 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 230.0 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.5 7.06120827912 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127736983612 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737526565783 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251566768194 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737526565783 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251566768194 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.0946893788 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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