There is no denying that tourism has made a breakthrough after a long time of being affected by Covid 19, which raises the question of whether it is a positive or negative sign. The essay below will examine the pros and cons of this trend.
On the one hand, the rapid development of this type of leisure industry brings back more business and long-term jobs for civilians. By investing money into such scenic spots as beaches and historic areas, the governments have the ability to take advantage of the unbelievably growing potential, which is expected to be capable of providing jobs for the majority of local residents. Accordingly, that contributes greatly to reducing unemployment and raising the average income of the country.
On the other hand, the growth of sector service put popular tourist destinations at risk of being destroyed by a large number of travelers. In fact, besides the fact that a great many of the touring areas are not well-manged and lack supervisors, some visitors also do not have the awareness. Therefore, littering, feeding animals without permission, and retreading become more and more uncontrollable. The prime example of this matter may be the coral reefs along the beach in southern Viet Nam, which are seriously affected on account of scuba diving and activities related to traveling.
All in all, despite its negative effects, the fact that government’s strong dependence on touristry can be refused. Furthermore, governments may fix the negatives with proactive measures and invest more to maximize the benefits
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...eing affected by Covid 19, which raises the question of whether it is a positive or negative sign. The ...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...tinations at risk of being destroyed by a large number of travelers. In fact, besides the fact th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, furthermore, may, so, therefore, well, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90432818342 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7920772161 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.454545455 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.073246281659 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261866868056 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275840375423 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0410485277445 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312633213998 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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