Nowadays university education is considered very important for people s future However there are a lot of successful people who didn t get higher education Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life Justify your opinion with releva

It is true that higher education plays a crucial role in everyone's life. Some people believe that tertiary education is not vital for future career opportunities but others oppose this proposition. This essay will discuss the benefits of higher education in the upcoming paragraphs along with my point of views.

To initiate with, there are multifarious advantages of getting university education. First and foremost is that university provide theoretical as well as practical knowledge which is really beneficial for students. For example nursing student get a chance to gain practical knowledge due to internship programmes. So, scholar get more pragmatic information rather than theoretical. Furthermore, owning to higher education learner gain vast knowledge rather than their curriculum activities. They get an opportunity to learn new skills like music, swimming ectectra which boost up their confidence and prepare them for various aspects of life. Hence, it is beneficial for the holistic development of a student.

On the other hand, some masses notion that without university education one can become successful in their life because, they think that tertiary education is necessary for those who want to become an engineer, doctor and scientist. If someone wanf to make their career as a player or musician then there will be no need of higher studies. There are alot of people who become successful without going to universities. For instance, sachin tendulkar a eminent cricketor everyone know him. He didn't get higher studies but he become famous and popular. So, university education is not required for every profession.

To recapitulate, tertiary education is pivotal for everyone as it is helpful for career growth and despite it higher education is important for the overall growth of a student.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, really, so, then, well, for example, for instance, as well as, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44522968198 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88659490948 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7332418681 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6470588235 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366326319155 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109991677565 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696246224276 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233231274749 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549299376589 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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