Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make? Has this become positive or negative development?
State-of-the-technology has huge impact on the relationship of people. Predominantly,social media applications has revolutionized the way of interacting the people.To elaborate,there is a large number of social sites:Facebook,Twitter and Whatsapp which are responsible to change the way of talking the people;however,in the past people used to write the letters to share information but now due to breakthroughs in technology, people who live far end of the world,can talk to relatives even in modern era it is possible to make face-to-face communication via the internet
There are several advantages of utilizing the social sites to communicate.Firstly,it is a convenient way to interact with people in foreign countries by using internet.Secondly,it also save the worker's time. It generally means that employers and employees from different nations can attend online meetings. So, they do have any need to commute from one place to another for their business purpose.Furthermore, people can also make a lot of friends on Facebook, Instagram. In this way, social sites are the best platform to interact with people.
To conclude,technology has certainly revolutionized communication between individuals so it has many positive outcomes which are aforementioned in essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82446808511 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.39186186673 2.80592935109 157% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 249.602628636 49.4020404114 505% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.5 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248739665793 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101906128387 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075556159412 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139987959474 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604079874327 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.63 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.07 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 34.5 9.78957915832 352% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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