Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government to do help radius this amount of rubbish produced .
In this expeditiously evolving world number of people are making much factory along the country where boondocks. Such as factory's get out of rubbish and smoke. It reason many people claim that protease.
On the one hand. Nowadays a lot of factories are building in country side.
Consequently many people may be having a job. However if the companies developing keep going sothat fabrics length of service. Otherside organization companies sabotage air and environmentally. Atmosphere problems Are a hotly-debated topic that often divides opinion. Haveing considered these points fabrics big companies should be reduce or new and economic organizations must be build near future.
Than several environmental problems may be slove and we environmentalism.
Furthermore almost several years later.It clear that everyone near future our planeta will be full rubbish and harmly smoke. So we may be able to clean environmental place. If we environmentally friend for the ecology than we will be able to slove problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'reasons'?
Suggestion: reasons
...ctorys get out of rubbish and smoke. It reason many people claim that protease. On ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eason many people claim that protease. On the one hand. Nowadays a lot of facto...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...actories are building in country side. Consequently many people may be having a job. Howeve...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...uently many people may be having a job. However if the companies developing keep going ...
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Message: Did you mean 'reduced'?
Suggestion: reduced
... points fabrics big companies should be reduce or new and economic organizations must ...
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Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...ganizations must be build near future. Than several environmental problems may be s...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
... may be slove and we environmentalism. Furthermore almost several years later.It clear tha...
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... Furthermore almost several years later.It clear that everyone near future our pla...
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Suggestion: clears
...rthermore almost several years later.It clear that everyone near future our planeta w...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...y cars. We can find almost solutions to some of the problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36111111111 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13421480903 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672222222222 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9405008934 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.3125 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.25 20.7667163134 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0882003756836 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029010122772 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282890101138 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490204708962 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307153151274 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.62 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.