Nowadays we can see definite signs of surplus production in almost every industry sector, and this is leading to environmental damage. What are some possible solutions to this situation?
Globalization has integrated the world economically,socially,politically and culturally through advances of technology,transportation and communication.Along with copious positive outcomes it proffers, there are few visible drawbacks which can be witnessed in the excessive manufacturing of most industrial commodities across the globe causing severe ecological impacts to the atmosphere on earth.A few influential factors responsible for this as well as relevant solutions to tackle this problem shall be discussed in detail in the ensuing /subsequent paragraphs.
Apparently,the most provoking factor for augmenting surplus production of consumer goods is the exceeding competition levels in the market.Moreover,in order to alleviate costs and escalate sales,manufacturing units produce in bulk,using fuel powered machinery,that release toxic waste into the atmosphere, increasing carbon-footprint, thus causing global warming. Another striking point to consider is the filling up of landfill sites due to disposal of the surplus produce;especially the commodities made from non-biodegradable plastic material.There is no denying that these substances release poisonous gases when burnt whilst taking over several hundred years to degrade thus polluting the soil ,air and water.Thus,the current trend of excessive production could have several detrimental ramifications of the global environment.
One of the most viable solution for the above mentioned problem would be to strictly legislate and curb the produce of surplus goods by the ruling bodies.Infact stringent laws must be imposed,levying heavy penalties on the production units that violate these laws.A good illustration of this would be the government of China which has ensured the limit of production to control the levels of surplus.In addition to this,moving towards non-biodegradable,environmental friendly resources such as solar,hydro and tidal energy might seize the repercussions caused by the burning of fossil fuels in industries for the manufacturing of the goods.Hence,a few checks if put in place can surely help the further depletion of the environment.
To recapitulate,the severity of ecological damage due to exceeding levels of consumer goods production is irreversible;however,further harm can be curtailed if he solutions mentioned above are accepted and implemented.It can also be suggested that each unit must research and evaluate the quantum to be produced so that along with the environment the losses to people can also the reduced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2186.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1404494382 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.32871183853 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.151257914 49.4020404114 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 437.2 106.682146367 410% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.2 20.7667163134 343% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.2 7.06120827912 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154844936263 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808157564934 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445756549849 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949548145391 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394797249248 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.1 13.0946893788 329% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.97 50.2224549098 -52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 11.3001002004 305% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.52 12.4159519038 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.97 8.58950901804 151% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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