Nowadays, as women and men have to work full time, household duties should be equally devided. Do you agree or disagree?
Today, almost everyone has to work full time regardless of their gender. Because of this, I agree with the idea that men and women should do the same amount of work at home.
First of all, this division has various benefits in individual family. For women, who usually take responsibility for the majority of household work, it would improve their both mental and physical health. This is because reducing a great amount of work at home means house wifes have more time to take care of their appearance or pursue a higher position in career; as a consequence, they will feel happier. In an other aspect, children growing up in these family will receive love and education from both parents, which teaches them to respect the family sentiment. Additionally, if every member shares the chores, they will interact each other more regularly; thus they will be more sympathetic with each other.
Furthermore, thank to this, society will be better. The gender equality could be ensured when the females are not only considered as assistant of their husband. As women have a stable income, their voice will have more significance to their partner, which is followed by the decrease in family violence. In addition, when domestic chores is splited equally, the job opportunities will be equal for each gender. Then, an equal society will be created and advanced.
In conclusion, although there are different arguments about whether men should do the same amount of work at home as women or not, I still believe that housework should be divided equally for both of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rity of household work, it would improve their both mental and physical health. T...
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Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...consequence, they will feel happier. In an other aspect, children growing up in these fa...
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Message: Did you mean 'this family' or 'these families'?
Suggestion: this family; these families
...an other aspect, children growing up in these family will receive love and education from bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, still, then, thus, as to, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98098859316 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55407478536 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3761075825 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250947489777 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910551291252 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727925160464 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183843787125 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786929569741 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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