Nowadays, young people admire sports stars, though they often do not set a good example. What do you think?
There has been a rising trend in youngers to look up to sports stars as role models. Although not all athletes set a good example, I believe that the majority of them have a positive influence on young people's behaviors.
From an individual perspective, an adolescent may idolize a well-known sportsperson who has many good qualities. No sports superstar makes it to the top without the years of dedication to training and a healthy diet. By emulating these players, youngsters will be inspired to join the sports clubs or gym, which results in healthy lifestyles or the opportunity to pursue the lifelong dream as a sports star. Another distinct characteristic of sportspeople is the determination to overcome injuries and illness, setbacks in their own lives. Paragame, the sports events for disabled athletes, has been on air recently to give inspiration to young people who unfortunately have the disability.
From a social perspective, there are many examples of sports stars who provide a moral lesson for youngsters to follow. CR7 is one of the most idolized football players in the world, but he stills finds time to support charity organization and inspire his fans to join charitable campaigns, not only in his country but across the world. Even negative examples of people who cheated in the sports competition to reach the top could be served as moral lessons for young people. The cyclist Amstrong, who was found using performance-enhancing drugs, was once being a hero because of his fight against cancer.
In conclusion, It is beneficial for youngster to mimic their sports idols as they have a lot of admirable qualities, and these characteristics should be spread throughout the world
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e examples of people who cheated in the sports competition to reach the top could be s...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o because of his fight against cancer. In conclusion, It is beneficial for youn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, still, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13261648746 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08235808851 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4382087314 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141632457542 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523632750481 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490440035459 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966352324181 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409776846031 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.