Nowadays young people prefer going to shopping centres rather than spending their time in organised activities such as sport or music. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons to support your opinion using your own knowledge and experience.
Lifestyle of young people has undergone dramatic changes over recent years. Presently, young people are passionate to go to shopping centres to check out the latest updates. As a result, the interest towards co-curricular activities is declining day by day. Here, i would like to assert that it has more negative outcomes than positives.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, visiting to shopping complexes makes young people extravagant. To demonstrate, most of young people get tempted towards the products that are displayed in the showrooms. Hence, modern ...
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
You like to put a transition phrase at the beginning of all sentences, which is not necessary, and they actually break the smoothness of sentences. look:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.028 0.07
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 305 350
No. of Characters: 1540 1500
No. of Different Words: 182 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.179 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.049 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.674 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.053 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.828 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.526 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.304 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.028 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tivities is declining day by day. Here, i would like to assert that it has more n...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...ion is becoming spend thrift these days.Besides this, shopping of goods in a large amou...
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Line 6, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o lack of physical exercise. To justify, the trend of playing outdoors is replace...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, such as, as a result, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28618421053 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80269142202 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608552631579 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9756058582 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5789473684 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223655164308 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627489448931 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369992863439 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122013710867 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273827462917 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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