There is a growing demand for fresh water nowadays and this is becoming a global problem. What are the causes and solutions?
this is a fact scarcity of natural resources is being increasing at world level. population has been increasing day by day which leads the demand for fresh water. there are a number of reasons that why demand for ground water is escalating at higher rate and number of measures could be taken to curb this issue.
On the one hand, rising demand for water has a number of causes which i am going to discuss. Firstly, the growing population is primary reason to pump up fresh water as this is a basic need of all living things and no one can survive without water and everybody needs water for household activities. Secondly, Technical advancements are taking place day by day as most of the innovations are based on electricity that raises the need for more production of electricity. As a consequent, freshwater is the main element that is required for producing electricity such as big Dams hold huge amount of water to generate energy in the electric power plants. that is why the level of underground water is going down with the passage of time. Finally, cultivation of crops is an important cause as irrigation of crops is done by freshwater for their healthy growth. Hence, ground water is pumped with the help of engines.
On the other hand, along with the causes of rising demand of water, there are some solution that can help in saving fresh water sources. First of all, water is renewable natural resource and can be used for other purposes after renewing. To be more specific rain water can be used for irrigation then there would be no need to use ground water. Besides this, For the development of country launching innovations is significant; however, today there is great need for protecting natural resources. so, the use of freshwater should be decreased for upcoming generations otherwise they would be deprived from a natural resources like water, soil, trees, coal and many more. Apart from this, if there will be awareness among people regarding saving water, then people would collaborate to save water resources such as oceans, rivers and ponds and the most important one is ground water.
To conclude, Although there are some causes of high demand for freshwater yet i believe by creating awareness among people and collaboration of government and public can save water for next generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8883248731 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6330845157 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492385786802 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3311099994 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.294117647 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300683061827 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11169620206 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634365952804 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201775384929 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257392771821 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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