Nowdays more and more people want to get things done instantly (Service, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In this modern era, where time has more value than the money has, people who want to fulfill their needs within fewest time are demanding that their requirements should be accomplished as possible as very quick. This cause to both positive and negative impact.
First positive impact is many services were taken a place in the market in order to satisfy people with their fast assistance. Example is E-commerce sites. This includes online shopping, food ordering on website and lots of other web applications, which provide doorstep delivery in very short time. Several discoveries were also done by scientist to fix issue related to the information sharing. Internet is a best example of them, which provides data from all around the world to the any part of any nation within a very less duration. Third one is, various types of equipment and applications are being carried out day by day in many fields of research. Improving applications of computer system, new founding modes of transport are suitable model for that.
On the other hand, there are also some negative effects of this innovating factors. First is, people are becoming more lazy. Whenever they wish to a thing or service they use online systems instead of using self practiced habit. Whether it has good result or bad. People are now getting slave of internet and losing their traditional system of data sharing. Ex. Letters, newspaper and many more. Also people are compromising their fitness and work abilities by using mechanical inventions.
In the conclusion, this improvement effects on both kind of growth in human life. Whether it could be good for them or bad for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'within the fewest'.
Suggestion: within the fewest
... people who want to fulfill their needs within fewest time are demanding that their requireme...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...to the information sharing. Internet is a best example of them, which provides da...
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Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
.... Ex. Letters, newspaper and many more. Also people are compromising their fitness a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, third, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03272727273 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55478808295 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0689566349 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8888888889 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163400413404 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493672849041 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509890875733 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960911387727 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633470055421 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.