Nowdays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Why do you think it is happening? Is it a negative or positive development?
Technology is the use of scientific knowledge to produce new machinery and devices that can be used to provide different services or can be employed further to create more devices. Is the robots are essential for human work?
As consequently, in my opinion this trend has positive but a lot of negative effect on our society as well as on our planet. In order to live a healthy life, we need to reduce dependency on modern technology.
Start with, in modernization era, everyone have busy schedule . Mostly people are busy in our work. They have no time to do our home work and they depend on the new machines as well as with the help of robots people do every work very easily. Furthermore, robots produce more accurate and high quality work which is more worthwhile from human workers.
For example, in many factories robots are taking place of humans so the people have to find new jobs or be refrained. Finally, people can suffer from crisis in term of employment due to these advanced machines. Lastly, robots cost much money in maintenance and repair so everyone will not be able to handle the budget all time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ization era, everyone have busy schedule . Mostly people are busy in our work. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, lastly, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71065989848 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55281923215 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639593908629 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0589175545 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147648089491 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507437532677 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041426907622 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812975310361 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424005954145 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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