In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on cunstructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport
In a most country, according to some people, it required to pay out huge amount of money for rapid carriages between metropolitans on building new railway lines. However, others opine that the money should bpay out on update obtaining road transport. In my opinion, government should spend money on existing public transportation due to it is more low-priced, easier and more quick than new line building.
Basically, In a 21st century, people needs more fast and powerful carrying system due to the fact that their busy life and population growth. New railway construction is better solution for heavily congested transportation. For instance, government of China concluded to build new subway in Beijing, which reduced city traffic over 30%. Nevertheless, it required too many years (3 years) and lot of money.
On the other hand public transportation system plays an essential role for interconnecting the different parts of the cities and the highest percentage of people use this system to travel to different places. Conventional road transportation system is cheaper, more selective than rail communication. For example, train line in the UK, has always granted to a great extent to the overall transportation system in the country. Obviously, the public transport has easy to update and requires less period than build new railroad.
In the end, I personally believe that, the national budget should consumed for improvement of the obtaining public transports so that we save more money and time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st country, according to some people, it required to pay out huge amount of money...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32635983264 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02968165925 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610878661088 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2605231241 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.083333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336840145169 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112288084597 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559319194487 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198139909627 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623591302908 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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