In some countries of the world, some folks think that, the big chunk of money should be spent by government for fabricating a new railway tracks because it is very obligatory for the rapid trains among the cities.Having said that, other masses trust to spend this money for the ameliorate of current public methods of transport.Both the view points of this given statement will be analyzed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the convenience of fastest trains are fairly significant for an every individual to reach their destinations conveniently and for saving valuable time because the less time is consumed by these trains to reach from one place to another place.Furthermore, the trains are much safer mode of transport in the cities rather than other vehicles such as buses and cars because there is very less probability of occurring terrible accidents due to without roads.Especially, it is the cheapest source of transport for those people who have to up and down in their daily routine for jobs.
On the flip side, according to the mentality of some people ,public transport system plays an vital role for interconnecting the divergent parts of the city.Therefore,the expenditure of money is very obligatory for the current transportation infrastructure because the short distances can be easily covered by the high percentage of ordinary people with the help of buses and taxes.
To conclude,I personally believe that,the national budget should be similarly distributed for the welfare of rail and public transport because the every facility has its own significance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, similarly, so, therefore, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30039525692 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1702709477 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.355464046 49.4020404114 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.25 106.682146367 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.25 20.7667163134 305% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.5 7.06120827912 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283032152553 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169017189345 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949203244397 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169017189345 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949203244397 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.2 13.0946893788 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.93 50.2224549098 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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