In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Railways are the easiest mode of transportation in various countries.it is often argued that huge amount of money should be spent on construction of railways route between the cities while other group of people would like to spend it on renewing the public modes of transportation .this essay will discuss both points of view before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
on one hand , railways are the comfortable and fastest route of transportation. railways can carry number of passenger in one - go from one place to another and also provides much space for travellers.it connects various cities, towns and is also one of the best travelling options. Furthermore, modern electronic railways does not contribute to air pollution. for example, a survey conducted by local newspaper reports that 8 out of 10 passengers travel by train.
on the other hand , public transportation system plays an essential role to play in day-to-day life.short distance can be covered by using public buses as train routes does not travel to each and every places .for example- UK always prefer on public transport than railways.
to conclude, both railways and public transportation are essential mode of transportation are the essential mode of transportation. in my opinion, the national budget should be used in improving both modes of transportation as both of of travelling has its equal importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26244343891 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16854545892 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610859728507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.8067716813 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.375 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284414360781 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107206400838 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803524647874 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166678701585 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077309112189 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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