In modern days, one of the controversial problems is related to requirements of transportation associated with developments of a country are increasing day by day. Although many people think that the government needs to spend a lot of money in order to build new railway lines for powerful trains, the rest of them, including me, tend to believe that in order to tackle public problems related with transport, much money is needed for it. In this essay, I will support both views with examples and represent a conclusion.
On one side of the argument, there are people who claim that introducing advanced railways is much useful for the economy of a country. The primary reason for believing this is that trains for transportation of all types of products play vital roles in the economy because using a train for distribution save costs. It is also possible to argue that locomotive vehicles are so fast, which prevent to spoil food items transporting. A particularly good example is that such famous companies as the KFC, Android, and Apple that occupy the majority of commercial work with trains that go elsewhere and every year these companies invest improvement of railway lines.
On the other hand, spending a large amount of budget for expanding public transport is vital. people often have this opinion because some big problems such as traffic jam and air pollution that is created by cars that go through the city are growing day by day, and these issues require a lot of money. Two important illustrations of this are that research in 2015 shows that in many countries, since citizens who live in the city center leave a home in the morning, they spend four hours in the 10km distance in order to go to work, and CO2 emissions created by cars support an increase in air pollution by amount we cannot imagine.
In conclusion, as we have seen, this question is uneasy to discuss. In order to support the economy of a nation, spending money for constructing strongly railway lines are important but public transport has problems that should be solved by a lot of money. However, In my opinion, taking care of public transport is a priority to spend money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83914209115 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71739590877 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541554959786 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0878501914 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.846153846 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6923076923 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311385502436 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104514401263 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915115480719 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188215326008 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710920141925 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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