In modern days, the popularity of working from home is increasing day by day because a rise of advanced technology such as a computer, internet, and software erased requirements to work in the office. This has brought both benefits and drawbacks to individuals, company, and society.
One side of the argument, there are people who claim that a decreased ability to work by teamwork is being observed in the workplace. The primary reason for believing this is that every worker tends to work solo from home. As a result, face-to-face communication among co-workers is deleting a chance to study from each other. It is also possible that the productivity of a company without cooperation maybe lead to a fail. One particularly good example is that xNova founded in 2015 failed cause of lack of interaction of workers.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is argued that possible to work from dwelling allows workers to be more comfortable. People often have this opinion because instead of wasting time in the traffic jam for going to work, working at home significantly save time. Furthermore, a chance to prevent an increasing level of stress among society is created by advantage of this. One of the important illustrations is that research in 2016 shows that people working from home have more happiness than office workers.
In conclusion, the increasing tendency to work outside an office became a reason for a descend of communication among co-workers although an attitude of individuals and society on working from home are positive.
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- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by sell and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...k outside an office became a reason for a descend of communication among co-workers, an a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, may, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96268656716 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90589004021 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555970149254 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.227616528 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.307692308 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365544317778 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114903798873 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974072644578 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223586694127 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535808411116 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.