Elder people are very important part of family. Elder people are now taking care in care homes and nursing homes. Modern people want to live privately but they forget that elder people have experience more than them. This essay will discuss about the positive and negative aspects of this trend.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Eja Armaz
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 41.998997996 12% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 250.0 1615.20841683 15% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 50.0 315.596192385 16% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.65914794847 4.20363070211 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.88509946687 2.80592935109 67% => OK
Unique words: 40.0 176.041082164 23% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.8 0.561755894193 142% => OK
syllable_count: 81.9 506.74238477 16% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0374649095 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.5 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 7.06120827912 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250341540712 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146554152531 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141052728011 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250341540712 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 78.4519038076 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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