There are several reasons why obesity has become such a widespread issue. With more extremely negative impacts being witnessed due to this phenomenon, it is germane to discuss the causes of heaviness and explore the measures people should adopt to address this problem.
There are a number of reasons why obesity is such a serious issue. The first prime reason is perhaps people nowadays are fond of having a poor diet. This meant that they are decide to eat unhealthy food instead of more nutrient meal. It also meant that they are consuming food that contains a lot of chemicals and nutrients that are a health hazard. All of these adds up to any total illnesses such as cardiovascular diseases and diabetes.
Another rationale for this issue is that people are living a sedentary lifestyle. Due to the Covid 19 pandemic, they have to stay at home because of social quarantine. This means they are likely to do everything lazier. For example, just be sitting and laying down while working and studying for much of the day.
However, there are things that can be done to solve come to these problems if people really want to. The best way to start a healthy life is deciding to build a balanced diet. They can make their own meal with all nutrient ingredients. Thus, they can also do more exercise to improve their fitness and burn down calories. From there, they could set a good example for their children so they can have a healthy body.
To recapitulate, obesity is endangering human health. This issue can be ascribed to the cause of many deathly diseases. In response to this, people should have a healthful lifestyle to control the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, so, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77351916376 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49137935072 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.143608263 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1052631579 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1052631579 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126095851914 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412345911517 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320923130122 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079020283534 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301959949218 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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