Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that obesity is one of the most challenging issues in the rich countries. This essay will suggest that healthy diets and more physical activities are the best viable solutions to tackle this problem.
To begin with, the dietitians advise that balance meals with more fruits and vegetables than meat has proven to be successful in reducing the risk of overweight. That is to say that we should avoid some kinds of unhealthy foods which consist of high protein and fat levels such as fried chicken, drilled pork and so on because these dishes easily make you obese by supplying so many calories. For example, many studies have consistently showed that 60% of children using fast foods every week become obesity and this leads to many health problems in their future.
Another feasible measure is that we should join more sports activities to keep body slim. This is because when we do exercises the calories will be burnt significantly and this is conducive to a wonderful fitness level. The fact is that whatever type of physical activities you take part regularly will also help you to reduce the weight efficiently. Although sports is the best way to work off the fat but many people don’t participate any kind of athletics because of their flawed mindset. They don’t know that obesity is the origin of many severe diseases in future such as heart attack, stroke and high fat level in liver. A recent research by University of medicine in Ho chi minh city found that 85% of people doing exercises control their weight effectively.
To sum up, obesity is the adverse problem associated with health condition so we should pay more attention to our diets and physical events because they are the best solutions to settle above problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: Recent research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, kind of, such as, to begin with, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90635451505 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48211012725 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598662207358 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0640499692 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117251623879 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426038911824 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424724661663 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826976161865 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265588887339 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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