ome people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants or animals. Other say that there are more important environment problems.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is true that environmental problems have been becoming worse and they are always the urgent problems is posed for each government. While many people suppose that the lacking of endangered species is the main cause of the issue, however, others think that there are still more other problems. This essay will examine both views and I would argue that there are more important others than the loss of particular species.
On the one hand, environmental situation is at an alarming rate due to a lot of problems such as greenhouse effect and source exploration. Firstly, it is the well-known fact that the greenhouse is the main cause of all. This phenomenon generated changeable weathers, the temperature gap between past and recently has significant increased, it is colder in the winter and hotter in the summer, moreover strokewaves also appears frequently. Secondly, doubtless, natural resource over-exploration of human kind have to also take responsibility in front of the environment. For instance, not only illegal deforestation losses of habitat of numerous animal species, but it also becomes extinct many kind of plants.
On the other hand, it is noticable that the shortage of endanged species in natural world should not be disregarded. First of all, quantity of animal-plant species should be at balance point. Because when this propotion is changed, it would cause the ecological system imbalance between species in the natural environment. Futhermore, the disappear of plant species at safeguard forest areas could also lead to disaster for nature. Erosion, for expamle, has resulted in flood and reduced quality land takes serious consequences for environment.
In sum, the main environmental problems are caused by many issues, not only due to the loss of particular species of animals and plants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31833910035 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96102401585 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57785467128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3008089624 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221745759404 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748786528311 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647315848583 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154197520722 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861769509934 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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