One of the common concern of all the developing nation in the world is that of increasing instance of juvenile delinquent What are the causes that contribute to search situation What can be done to cope up with this situation

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One of the common concern of all the developing nation in the world is that of increasing instance of juvenile delinquent. What are the causes that contribute to search situation? What can be done to cope up with this situation?

Today, the growing of crime among children in developing countries, is one of the common issues that needs to be concerned more in our society. This essay will highlight why children commit crimes, and what can be done to overcome this problem.

Evidently, it is commonly believed that children from poor families can easily involve in such criminal activity. It has been clear that children who are belonging from impoverished family cannot get rudimentary amenities such as education, meals and so on. Because of this thing they perform criminal activities. For example, if a child gets basic facilities by doing crime, he or she will definitely continuously committees criminal act.

Apart from this, sometimes children can miss guided by media and can do such crime. Although TV and other kind of social media platforms are for entertainment purpose, sometimes children learn some criminal activities by watching movies and programs based on crime. For instance, nowadays television series and movies are being watched by all the types of age groups, so it is highly likely to say that children can easily commit crimes by watching these shows. Moreover, sometimes children are involved in crime due to jealousy for others.

On the other hand, they have been some solutions to tackle this situation. Firstly, parents should aware their children by guiding what is good, and what is bad for them. To exemplify, children's unusual behaviour can be immediately recognized by their parents and they can easily take an action against it. Last but not least, it is also a responsibility of teachers to guide children by giving them examples to not adopt criminal activities.

To conclude, I would for the like to state that parents should spend time with their children in order to know about what problem are they facing. The government should provide such basic amenities for children who are from poor families.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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...y. It has been clear that children who are belonging from impoverished family cannot get rud...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ies such as education, meals and so on. Because of this thing they perform criminal act...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14696485623 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64099204461 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8693787083 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137034567405 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523860069315 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552771547757 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936421573635 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723485014324 0.056905535591 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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