Thanks to the miracles of modern science, the life span of people is rising and staying longer. I am totally in favour of the benefits of longevity outweighing the drawbacks. This essay will discuss the advantages, disadvantages of increased life expectancy and support my opinion with relevant examples.
On one hand, one of the major positives of doubled life span is that it opens up the perfect opportunities and promotes the harmonious relationships among family members. For instance, grand parents can spend quality time with their loved ones, witness the growth of future generations and e...
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 425 350 //examples can be shorter, look, it is relatively long:
Take Alzheimer's disease for example, the prevalence of the disease soars markedly with an old age and the total costs of caring the ageing populations who suffered from dementia is truly daunting. According to the World Alzheimer Report, the net costs exceeded 600 billion dollars in 2016 worldwide and to add to this, Australian study estimated the projected total health costs to go up to 10 percent in the next twenty years will be due to this condition alone.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 425 350
No. of Characters: 2201 1500
No. of Different Words: 276 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.54 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.179 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.809 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 166 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 131 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.238 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.423 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.237 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.414 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.023 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...spite of astounding medical technology, some of the diseases may not be treated efficiently...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2262.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32235294118 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89674677328 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649411764706 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0475728155 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.714285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2380952381 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162653159013 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405161246026 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415845816861 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105611118007 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504482220866 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 78.4519038076 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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