Today medical care services have a very high quality and as a result human average age are increase. In my opinion, the benefits of long life definitely outweigh the drawbacks of its disadvantages, and I will explain this now.
On the one hand, there are 2 main disadvantages that it requires a lot of money and growth of population of the earth. Firstly, it is clearly that high services take high fees, to be health people need good medical care services. Not everyone can afford a lot of extra money in old ages to pay this. Secondly, if every person lives if everyone lives longer, the number of population in earth is growth. World’s resource is not enough for more than ability and it also require some money.
On the other hand, there also some advantages on this topic. Firstly, many people in young or old ages want to travel around the world in their retirement. It depends on health and wealth. If someone have a good health in his or her old ages, they can do it. Furthermore, older people have a good practice on their job or lifetime. They know special things that young people and governments need. They can give important advices to us. Lastly, the older people are likely to support their children. For instance, they care children, babies and other young ages. Usually old generation look after grandchildren in their retirements and bring up young generation.
In conclusion, although good health and life expectancy, depends on wealth and money, I think its advantages more than advantages.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81609195402 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61734903931 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7626625542 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8333333333 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198814482344 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529675429098 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038228607817 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114582553865 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222991444043 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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