The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make any comparisons where relevant.
This table compares the opinions of male and female club members about the activities, facilities and opening hours in a particular sport club.
It can be seen from the table opening hours is very comfortable for women and club facilities for men. And range of activities is not good for both gender members.
Female members very satisfied with range of activities are 35% , satisfied are also 35% and 30% of women are not satisfied. By contrast, 55% of men very satisfied, 40% men are satisfied and the least 5% are not satisfied with activities. The indicators of club facilities in male and female members are almost the same. 64% females and 63% males are very satisfied with club amenities. Almost a quarters of both gender are satisfied while 14% of females and 10 % of males are not satisfied with resources. Female members are really happy with opening hours, but just 3% of them are not satisfied. The lowest consent rate of men corresponds to this, slightly less than half.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tisfied with range of activities are 35% , satisfied are also 35% and 30% of women...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers are almost the same. 64% females and 63% males are very satisfied with club a...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a quarter' or simply 'quarters'?
Suggestion: a quarter; quarters
...y satisfied with club amenities. Almost a quarters of both gender are satisfied while 14% ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83431952663 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58049177345 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7528639184 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.7 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16798583831 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082036977859 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929212864614 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173139407384 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100898642437 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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