One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increaseing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Indubitably, the development of health care system day by day plays a paramount significant role in one's life. It provide numerous fruitful outcomes including high expectancy rate. However, this improvement contain the bag of both boon and bane but the merits of the same are outshine it's demerits that I will articulate in the upcoming paragraphs.
Fundamentally, this development hold myriad of substantial benifits. First of all, due to the effective medical care nowadays people under control their hereditary diseases. That is why, individuals have no fear about it. For instance, had my friend, Raman not regularly visit the doctor for the treatment of Thalassemia that he genetically receive from their mother then now it would reach on the final stage. Secondly, the epidemic situation is only controlled by the wide range of hospitals because if the medical care not invent medicines then it is too hard to stop the epidemic. For example, recently owing to shortage of medical care for corona virus millions of patents died.
Finally, beside from aforementioned prons to denizens the business sector also reap the benefit as in these days umpteen of campanies provide free medical care to their empolyee which not only assist them to increase their productivity but also they rarely fallen sick. To vindicate, the ABC industry is on the top position since it bestow free health care facilities. Henceforth, large amount of medical care contain plenty of positive consequences.
On the flip side, despite from above advantages, it create negetive effect on the eco-system because undoubtetly the high access of medicines aid flok to live longer. Consequently, it sharply escalate the populace which makes the pressure on the natural resources.
To recapitulate, it can be reitrated that, this essay covered two parts, the merits of the health care such as dominance over hereditary and wide spread diseases; whereas, all these advantages are overshadow it's demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3025477707 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85359026539 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652866242038 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4967388476 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207111346713 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581557928265 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038072645065 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937694413771 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351389098574 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.