It is generally acknowledged that the introduction of the technology has developed every sector which includes medical sector as well. From this prespective, some masses claim that increasing the number of medical amenities has made humans longevity, but just as everything has two aspects same way improved medical facilities has also some cons. So this essay will discuss both aspects of it in upcoming paragraphs before reaching a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are several advantages of developed medical region, first and foremost, the life limit of humans has increased in modern era than past due to the enhancement of medical equipments or machines which play a phenomenal role regarding diagnosis the major roots of fatal diseases. As a result, numerous unidentified previous diseases which caused the death of a plenty of individuals in past period, may be cured thoroughly. Secondly, medical sector is a major part of every country's economy growth which depends on the enhancement of its facilities. That's why all Nations add these sort of development in the top improved sectors.
On the other hand, since improvement in medical amenities such as latest machines, the number of population is rising day by day. For instance, the latest treatment of Lethal diseases has increased the expectancy regarding life limits. According to a survey, about one quarter of those individuals who were at the lowest point of life expectancy have been cured with the help of invented latest medicines. Consequently, the rate of population growth is increasing dramatically because of nearly after 25 years new generation come according to a recent report.
To conclude, I personally believe that despite the suddenly improvement in the medical sector humans have not long life in comparison to past century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, sort of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32525951557 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91917272967 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60553633218 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8124960408 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.25 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188568710095 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062806224627 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387816365967 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109036563806 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010453159648 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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