One of the debating issue for offenders who had served their prison sentence and they have been free is society again is reoffending their crime. But there are some measures that could be taken in order to tackle this important problem.
Firstly, the most significant point for prison sentences is that the government could have been able to rehabilitate the prisoners. By rehabilitation programs in prisons, the government has a chance to change offender’s mind and thoughts and also could work on their behavior order to give them another chance to be a positive person and also to gain more skills to have better opportunities after releasing from prison.
Furthermore, despite rehabilitation programs there is another measure to make those rates less in society is community service. Offenders could be able to work in the society but without any payment. As a result, they would feel useful and also good about themselves to work with others and also could be a chance for people to accept offenders to be back to society. Consequently, wrongdoers would be felt welcome by people so they will not have any harsh feelings about being back to community.
In conclusion, the government could be able to take some actions to deal with criminals who have committed a crime after being punished. If offenders would be able to gain skills and abilities to have a job and also to be felt welcome by society they hardly go to commit a crime again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91219512195 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82082001907 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541463414634 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8467288811 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.875 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280901220176 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131431329825 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414929013863 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194686171961 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235920337255 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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