One of the debating issues that everyone bad heard it at least once, is global warming. This issue has several causes and some effects on the Earth and some solutions that should be taken.
Such as every other environmental issues, Global warming has lots of causes that are the results of human activities. Since people have been expanding their activites like their companies, the amount of greenhouse gases have been increasing. This leads to get the Earth warmer and as a result the climate has changed. The places that had lots of show, now they have raining, and other places that were warmer, are getting warmer. One another cause is the depletion of ozone level that leads to changing the climate.
Global warming has diverse and extremely dangerous effects on everything. Changing the climate and the Earth getting warmer cause lots of results, like more thunder, more earthquakes and floods because the more vapor in the atmosphere. And the biggest effects is on polar ices and the levels of ocean`s water. Polar ices have been melting and the level of water has been increasing so the places that have low heights will be drowning in the future and lots of lives will be in risked, for example, more plants and animals will extinct because of the effects on their habits and preys. Besides all the causes and effects of global warming, there are several solutions that should be taken in order to reduce the speed of this effects. Declining the amount of greenhouse gases in companies and houses and use more clean or alternative energies instead of using fossil-fuel power in order to reduce the pollution. Also use public transportations more than using cars and vehicles and even change human`s food habit such as eating less meat and raising less farm animals will be very effective for this issue. Additionally, planting one more tree will be so helpful to reduce the amount of greenhouse gases.
In conclusion, Global Warming is a serious issue that has put all the living thing`s lives in danger. If people know all the causes and the effects of this problem, they will take the solutions so as a result the Earth will be a better place for all living things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88563049853 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49988948939 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480938416422 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9491942067 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.066666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1936507827 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750453539877 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692871242977 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132793906388 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387670332951 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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