Online shopping is increasing significantly. What the effect might be on the environment and the type of job which were required.
Give your knowledge and experience.
It is true that nowadays selling goods online is rapidly developing and mostly popular among young generation. This essay will discuss how online markets effecting the environment and also the type of jobs which is required.
First of all, effect that online markets made towards the environment are mostly positive. It is also a fact that online shopping do not require big office spaces, so that allocating big land spaces and building wider buildings are un-necessary. As an example, amazon.com which was started in a small office space. In addition, all the advertising and marketing are distributing over social media and broadcasting media, which means no big advertisement spaces like huge banners in parks or road sides are required. Most importantly, most off the shopping process is done in online, so that no more traffic congested roads.
Secondly, the jobs it requires are little bit different. Despite of manufacturing jobs, all the other part of the process needs people who familiar with computers. Because the selling, purchasing and delivering are computer base, so that most of the jobs like delivery drivers, marketing and administration all required computer literacy. If I link to the same example I mentioned earlier, in amazon.com there are many people who are doing digital and social media marketing website administrating which is highly depend on computers.
In conclusion, increasing popularity in online shopping not only have a positive effect on the environment, but also for the job market. Because when a particular online shop grows rapidly, the talent which needs to maintain also increase and in demand. In my experience, nowadays all the young generation are computer literate and it helps them to be employed quickly as soon as they graduated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: little; bit
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Suggestion: who is a familiar
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oyed quickly as soon as they graduated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30175438596 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88298518386 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8293423036 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220938834211 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808495445099 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682257250853 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143638622375 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524749893101 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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