The only reason to work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that the only purpose to work hard is to get more money. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons along with examples for disagreeing with the notion. Firstly, I will discuss how skills development can be one of the motives for giving our 100% in the office environment. Secondly, I will explore how we can work towards contributing to society and doing charity by working with maximum effort.
To begin with, being financially stable is a need of the hour, but money is not the only reason for putting extra efforts into the workplace. We should put our 100% efforts into the office since it helps in developing skills and making us skilled professionals. For example, while working on a project, an employee might learn new things or get hold of new aspects of existing routine activity. Furthermore, by putting in everything that you have, you might get an extremely good outcome, which will ultimately give you self-satisfaction. For instance, some artists strive hard to create a beautiful portrait, which is appreciated in the community and results in self-worth.
Charity is also one of the biggest aspects that should be taken into consideration. For example, if a Doctor helps a greater number of patients to be cured of their illness, the more charity he does. Apart from this, once an individual is capable enough to support financially his/her family, he/she can do the noble task of donating the money to poor and needy people.
To conclude, there are many reasons to strive hard in the workplace. In my opinion, I strongly disagree that money is the only reason for working hard and doing our best.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87455197133 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74375978855 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4297804793 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24714159053 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938153637517 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104386144879 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183486609508 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125607204297 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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