The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to tech parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
Family environment is such that it plays a significant role among the members. If there is good environment then, it helps in upgrading the children's life. One of the best method of handling the pace of crime rate of youth offenders is to give the lesson through parenting skills. I completely agree and in this essay i will support my opinion with example.
Firstly, strict rules and regulation should be made. For instance, if there is no any restriction then they may involve in the illegal activities. Individual never listen to their parents rather do their own. If there is no any boundary between the youths then one dat it is sure that the move in wrong path.
Another reason why i agree with is the future of youths depends upon the guidance given to them. For example those guardian who have all the parenting skills definitely shows a good path. I strongly believe that this is the best way in which youth can get love, support, good hospitality. What is more important is proper care with good parenting skills.
In conclusion, although it is a common belief that parents skills is the only way to slow down the momentum of the illegal activities. I think strong rule and regulation and care given to them plays equally significant role for their better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7802690583 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53307267918 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587443946188 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8228537449 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.1428571429 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205510655922 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615913483411 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716214813249 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114347797837 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361437248955 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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