While some argue that gaining victory in sports is derived from physical strength, others point out that mental toughness is the key factor. From my point of view, mental power is as important as physical fitness in determining success.
On the one hand, grabbing success in sports requires extraordinary physical fitness. First, muscular strength and other skills such as agility, endurance, and stamina enhance the success chance of athletes. For instance, runners need to adjust their pace during different stages of the track to maintain their position and take the lead. Moreover, most sportspeople require specific diets as well as intensive training to build muscle. This is because physical toughness helps them avoid injuries during competitions, or their career path would be ruined. In other words, having a good physical condition ensures their continuity in the athletic performance.
Nevertheless, those who advocate the idea of being physically strong is the key factor to be successful are not seeing the indispensable role of mental toughness. First and foremost, a competitive spirit or a win-at-all-cost attitude is the key factor to motivate sports players to try as hard as possible in the game. Furthermore, in endurance sports such as football, players must stay focused despite their tiredness. For this reason, trainers put in place spirit coaching and complex exercises on the field to train players to think and make decisions when they are stressed and fatigued. Lastly, in case of having failed, they must be mentally strong to overcome and achieve their own goals in the next competition.
In conclusion, sports players have to face both mental and physical difficulties on the field. Therefore, they should be trained to be physically fit and mentally resilient.
- Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer while others are in favour of th 84
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- As countries develop their populations tend to live individually or in small family units In your opinion what is this cause and what are the effects on society 78
- Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education Universities should make it easier for such groups to enrol To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work What are reasons for it Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35689045936 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83369314302 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9017323238 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.066666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317809097216 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104768537831 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752817035363 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204687815499 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522088019698 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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