To master and succeed in sports, there are numerous factors and skills that an individual needs to enhance. One school of thought opines that physical strength plays the most significant part in this, while others argue that mental strength is more important. This essay will discuss both perceptions and my point of view will be elaborated in the conclusion.
On the one hand, having good physical strength is a necessity for 2 main reasons. First and foremost, almost every sport requires a certain level of fitness. To take up a sport, an individual must have good strength, not to mention to win. For instance, normally, to enrol in a sports competition, contestants will have to meet some particular physical requirements such as weight, and height. Secondly, physical strength does define numerous factors that influence one’s potential to succeed in sports. Take running for example, it demands that the winner has durability and speed, and those two elements heavily depend on one’s physical strength.
On the other hand, mental strength also plays a crucial role in sports. This is because sports participants need smart strategies to win the game. They need a proper diet and training programme before the contest and techniques during the competition. Additionally, mental strength also includes the willpower and determined mind of a person, which are also essential when playing sports.
In conclusion, both physical and mental strength is necessary to achieve success in sports. However, I think physical strength is the basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32926829268 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75175629986 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2044156419 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200575750154 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707683431631 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438940795637 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130209465859 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372490953495 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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