It is widely argued that parents should attend classes teaching parenting skills and child development to help their children develop in an appropriate way. This essay solely agrees with the above idea. And this essay will discuss about its benefits to enhance the relationships between parents and children, and how this method could encourage children to develop properly.
First of all, by joining the course, parents can deeply understand their children’s behaviors and emotions, therefore, strengthen the bond between them in the family. This is because the course helps parents to provide an overview about the way children behave and how they express their feelings that almost no parents have little knowledge about this. For example, with the help of the course, parents are able to handle tricky situations such as how to feed children properly, or how to converse to their children who are going to adolescent, and so on.
In terms of educational purposes, the course provides useful information on what happen to their children, and therefore, encourage them to engage in outdoor activities more often, teach them how to self-care at schools, and so on. Schools these days usually experience school violence, therefore, it is necessary for parental guidance to protect themselves in such situations. Taking Japan as a prime example, its violent rates at school are increasing rapidly annually, and thus knowledge about this can help children to avoid being the victim of school violence.
In conclusion, parental instructions play an important role in the development of children wellbeing, and parenting skills and child development courses will help parents to develop their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41198501873 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72420358844 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3873400815 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193025984771 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903679370693 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10998447525 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157470071869 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109516870814 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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