In this era, many travel agencies have offered an enormous of package tours for tourists who highly desire to explore far-flung areas or foreign countries. From my perspective, this phenomenon has positive influences on local inhabitants; however, local environment may encounter several negative impacts.
First and foremost, with the development of tourism in remote regions, local people can seize opportunities to seek well-paid and constant jobs in industrial fields and help to alleviate unemployment in the area.. For instance, they are able to work in numerous entertainment centers such as local restaurants, parks and tourist destinations or become local tour guides to make a living and fulfill their demands in terms of finance. Furthermore, these regions can be recognized by travellers as people have chances to promote their unique and rich culture and local specialties to foreign friends, which can boost the national economy as well as gain more revenue.
In terms of the environment, the natural habitats of wildlife species can be lost with the emergence of tourism in remote communities since the forests are cut down to construct recreational facilities or accommodations for tourists. Additionally, human activities are also a leading cause to trigger severe environmental issues. For example, rubbish that is dumped into the nearby sites makes water and soil tainted, leading to many health problems for the people in surrounding regions.
In conclusion, local inhabitants can benefit tremendously from organized tourism; nevertheless, the negative environmental consequences that this situation brings are far more significant.
- Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped Discuss both the use views and give your opinion 84
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby Therefore smoking should be banned in public places To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Organized tours to remote community and other countries are increasingly popular Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the local environment 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...lp to alleviate unemployment in the area.. For instance, they are able to work in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68548387097 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12390459469 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673387096774 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8811526234 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.666666667 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296866361639 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106038421739 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648928092352 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157378449229 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456430542725 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.15 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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