ot is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance, sport, music and others are not. however, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be thought to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both those views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer knowledge or experience.
Today, the world has encompassed some superior individuals in different fields that some of them have showed their talent since childhood and others not. however, the content to which genetic plays role in the life of these people seems to be unanswered question. this essay explores to prevailing views on the issue of important factors in the success of these superiors.
The people who believe that top athletes or musicians have had their talents since birth and the course of time or hardworking can only empower this talent not create it. they argue that being in a developed country and using the best facilities can not characterize the citizen of that country from less privileged countries with the least facilities and welfare. By way of illustration, consider the Olympic games that have been held every four years and many athletes from different countries and different levels of welfare have competed with each other. It is interesting to know see that especially in individual majors, the victorious sportsmen or sportswomen are from deprived countries with the minimum of required facilities.
on the other hand, the other group claim that genetics can be the second factor of achievement and diligence and perseverance occupy the first rank. the children that were born with special talent will not become successful only by relying on this talent without any hardworking. The studies suggest that each talent needs special environment to emerge and it can only pave the way but hardworking is the main player of this field. So, it is proven that humankind is able to achieve the best by trying hard and not become disappointed.
In the final analysis, i tend to believe that successfulness in any major is a combination of various elements that genetic and perseverance are the main factors. That is to say, we can not confine this achievement to one of these two factors. However, in different people the proportion of each factors may be different and it is crystal clear that talented people must work hard to set the stage for the success and achievement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, in fact, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01734104046 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73174445102 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534682080925 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9273298056 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173762378082 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575507891273 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310993817113 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106047689285 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142307936919 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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