Our society are becoming more and more flexible , people, especially children need to obey their parents `s advice. Therefore , I totally agree with this idea,The main reason why I think that children should follow their parent`s advice because parents is

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...iety are becoming more and more flexible , people, especially children need to obe...
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... their parents 's advice. Therefore , I totally agree with this idea, The ma...
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... kind of people in society. Children are too young distinguish between right and ...
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Suggestion: thing
...ll introduct them and bring a brilliant things in our life. Children feel safely when ...
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... that if children become a mature person , they will understand these helpful advi...
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...d these helpful advices of their parents . For example, when I was a child , I had...
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...arents . For example, when I was a child , I had a big dream about my career .My ...
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...hild , I had a big dream about my career .My parents knew it , so they tried to d...
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...ld , I had a big dream about my career .My parents knew it , so they tried to do ...
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... , I had a big dream about my career .My parents knew it , so they tried to do th...
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...eam about my career .My parents knew it , so they tried to do the best thing help...
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...eam which come true now. In conclusion , younger people should follow their pare...
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...eart and possess a great love for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46942541054 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656976744186 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2532381485 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.621337190088 0.244688304435 254% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.27937317827 0.084324248473 331% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217526523173 0.0667982634062 326% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.407321689235 0.151304729494 269% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.228525790377 0.056905535591 402% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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