Our society are becoming more and more flexible , people, especially children need to obey their parents `s advice. Therefore , I totally agree with this idea,
The main reason why I think that children should follow their parent`s advice because parents is person who have handful of well experiences and communicate with all kind of people in society. Children are too young distinguish between right and wrong. Parents will introduct them and bring a brilliant things in our life. Children feel safely when they are living with their parents
It should also be stated that if children become a mature person , they will understand these helpful advices of their parents . For example, when I was a child , I had a big dream about my career .My parents knew it , so they tried to do the best thing help me to pursuit of this dream which come true now.
In conclusion , younger people should follow their parent` advice because parents is a person who have big heart and possess a great love for them.
Our society are becoming more and more flexible , people, especially children need to obey their parents `s advice. Therefore , I totally agree with this idea,
The main reason why I think that children should follow their parent`s advice because parents is person who have handful of well experiences and communicate with all kind of people in society. Children are too young distinguish between right and wrong. Parents will introduct them and bring a brilliant things in our life. Children feel safely when they are living with their parents
It should also be stated that if children become a mature person , they will understand these helpful advices of their parents . For example, when I was a child , I had a big dream about my career .My parents knew it , so they tried to do the best thing help me to pursuit of this dream which come true now.
In conclusion , younger people should follow their parent` advice because parents is a person who have big heart and possess a great love for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eart and possess a great love for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46942541054 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656976744186 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2532381485 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.621337190088 0.244688304435 254% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.27937317827 0.084324248473 331% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217526523173 0.0667982634062 326% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.407321689235 0.151304729494 269% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.228525790377 0.056905535591 402% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.