Overpopulation is an alarming problem in big cities. Write an essay about its causes
There is no doubt that population explosion is one of the most pressing problems facing the world today. In order to find a solution to this issue, we need to understand the long-term causes which is the lack of education and technological achievements
Initially, illiteracy is a fundamental cause of overpopulation. Most developing countries have a great number of people who have little knowledge about family planning and do not understand the negative effects of overpopulation. They get married at early ages and are unaware of they way to control population as well as the need to reduce the excessive growth of population. This increases the possibility of giving birth and contributes to a sharp rise in population.
Moreover, another noteworthy reason is the tremendous breakthroughs in medicine. With the latest technological advancements and discoveries, there is a significant decline in the death rate and a dramatic rise in birth rate. The new inventions have brought treatments for many fatal diseases, which results in an increase in the life expectancy of individuals. Furthermore, many modern methods had made it possible for those who can not be pregnant to undergo fertility treatments much more safely. As a consequence, medicines of today can boost the natality in our society.
To sum up, the massive increase in the world’s population has created a crisis due to not only the lack of education but also technological development in medicine as well
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- Some people point out that there will be less international travel in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend? 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, no doubt, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27426160338 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27224371244 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616033755274 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8263810352 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.636363636 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0618770782304 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0188316312061 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268638041551 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0316236499151 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199118390625 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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