It is fact that, one of the grave issues faced by the urban area is the escalating rate in population. There are several contributors to this menace and it is important to adopt effective and urgent measures to tackle it.
One obvious reason of overpopulation in cities is, cities are the main job hub which offers countless job opportunities to the job seekers. This is because majority of businesses such as IT companies, textiles shops, hardware shops and many others are located on cities. Since these companies recruits different types of job seekers from educated people to unskilled workers, people migrate from rural area to urban area. In addition to this, people working in these companies prefer cities to live which helps to avoid long travels and travel expense for their job. Hence, urban areas become congested. Another significant factor is, better facilities provided by the cities. Cities have high quality facilities like transport, education, health care system compared to villages and which are available in short distance. Consequently, people choose cities to live which brings comfort into people's life.
However, the menace of overcrowded cities can be tackled through effective measures. One obvious solution is, the government should take steps to improve the facilities and technologies in country side which would help the business move from cities to village areas and grow in same path as cities. If new businesses started in rural area, it would help the people who lives in that area to get a better job opportunities in their living area. Hence, it would control the migration from rural area to urban area.
To sum up, population explosion in cities is a burning issue all over the world. Since its consequence on society are detrimental, if needs to addressed meticulously keeping long sighted plans in mind.
- Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job. Others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 61
- Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved? 67
- Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies Do you think art and music still have a place in today s modern world of technology Should children spend more time learning art and music at school 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, in addition, in short, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67509293712 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8168906514 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0884781139454 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334705838277 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406225651873 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515834866436 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257605426596 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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