The overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government s can tackle these problems.
There are many problems may happen because of increasing in the number of people in cities.This essay will discuss two of the main problems associated with overpopulation in urban areas, and then suggest practical solutions.
There are many effects according to climb in the number of population. One of these effects is lack necessity of life.That means, more people in the cities, less services like food, medicine,and water. For example, in African cities, because there are a huge number of people,there is lack necessity.So, it mention as one of poorest country. In addition, this dilemma led to reduce of job opportunities .
There are many solutions of this worrying problem can government tackle it.Firstly, it should increase the awareness during people of importance to get less baby to find great service.Take China for example, each family should has only one baby to reduce numerous of population. Moreover, we can increase awareness between citizen by telling lectures in hospitals and schools and distribute handout.
In conclusion, there are two principal problems with overpopulation in urban area which are lack of life necessities and lack of job opportunity, and this can be solved through increase awareness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44559585492 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01930322159 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59067357513 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4875875598 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.375 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189885614696 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683273848861 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404488714284 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105511876482 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134881653207 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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