Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that the numerous population growth poses an extreme threat to the environment. Although I agree with this statement, I believe people's acknowledgment of environmental severity is much more vital.
One reason is that the growing population poses a great threat to the environment. Too many people living in a particular area would exceed the carrying capacity of that area. As the population continues growing, the demand for necessities and resources such as food, water, and energy grows. Humans might exploit natural resources to satisfy their needs causing too much pressure on the environment. There would consequently be enormous issues such as deforestation, and habitat destruction. For instance, more and more people need to warm themselves, and thereby the fossil fuels used for heating systems increase, which would pollute the air with greenhouse gas emissions, contributing to the exacerbation of air pollution and climate change.
However, overpopulation is just one of the most severe environmental problems. Awareness of people is also a contributory factor leading to environment-related issues. If humans are more aware of nature, they would consider a better way to implement a specific procedure. Take pollution from industrial work for example. Since some people put more attention on their net profit, they are ignorant of protecting the environment. Although natural protective regulations have been enacted, some factories emit a large deal of untreated exhaust from burning fossil fuels and industrial processes into the air, partially increasing air pollution.
In conclusion, admitting that overpopulation causes the most intense environmental consequences, I realize that people aware of how serious the environment has become is much more impactful on nature. Therefore, awareness among the worldwide population must be raised to mitigate the current issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67719298246 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21668472718 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3408482661 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128503789251 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443168266004 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659158362158 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973358596443 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592497820385 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.