Owning a car today is considered to be a necessity. With a car, you can go anywhere at your convenience. Unlike traditional forms of transport, a car helps you save time. However, some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages.
Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.
It is true that cars definitely help human to be shown around without a waste of time. Although it can be argued that the car has lots of advantages, its disadvantages stand out more. I believe that car is the best innovation of modern world which has a bunch of strength that enhancing your convenience.
On the one hand, this transport - car severely affects on “the health” of the world. Cars have boosted the air and noise pollution in cities, owning to more humans to suffer from the respiratory, heart diseases, or mostly cancers. When being "tortured" by the noise, having to stand for a long time in a dusty environment, people not only suffer from physical diseases but also cause impacting on the codes of behavior as a result of making people more frustrated, angry and difficult to control. Furthermore, the environment has the same situation with human, global warming is one of major drawback. Many physical impacts of global warming are already visible, including extreme weather events, glacier retreat, changes in the timing of seasonal events.
On the other hand, the private car is a convenient mode of transportation. Having more comfortable seats, air-conditional or some gadgets help people to feel better than using other public transport systems. Users have more private space compared to using public transportation. Driving own car can take the freedom and the time while he travels. For instance, he can carry some bargains, goods and other valuables in his car truck. Moreover, it is vital that automotive industry will increase the job opportunities for workers. Manufacturers probably work in car companies and have a high safary than the other job and reduce the unemployment rate.
In conclusion, I personally believe that the private car is a very useful vehicle that offers more advantages than demerits to its owner. However, the environmental issues due to excessive use of cars should not be ignored and we should use private cars absolutely when it is necessary and at other times, we should use public transportations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14159292035 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00906789876 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589970501475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8056656131 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.529411765 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359969663757 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117957231809 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069200041002 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220875226359 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598238121772 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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