Parent are best teacher, to what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is sometimes suggested that close relatives are likely to become your tutor. I strongly agree that blood relatives are teach you about all aspects of your life in the long run. Firstly, this essay will discuss the finest educator are your family, and secondly, it will analyze another possible important features of your professor.
The primary reason why parents are a golden opportunity to improve your life in future is that they might give you experience from their previous lifetime. This is because they have passed some part of lifecycle that is similar to yours lifespan. As a result you may skip their mistakes and move on to the next adventure of your being. A prime example is serial that names families, which talk about problems of students, where parents share with their knowledge and vision about the world.
Another point to consider is that family are not best choice to teach themselves. The reason for this is that close relatives have passed another life, that differ with your lifespan due to the environment and traditions. As a consequence they do not know about present technologies and about the current habits and students will wear a past clothes or teenager will hear a previous music trends. For instance, children in China are likely to become like their parents, as a result they will be took their old habits or old fashion.
In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that parents are likely to stay your teacher, but if blood relatives are too old it will be bad experience to spend your time with them. This is due to the fact that parents are your key to success in the future and that father and mother may downgrade yourself in some aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...strongly agree that blood relatives are teach you about all aspects of your life in t...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the best'.
Suggestion: not the best
...er point to consider is that family are not best choice to teach themselves. The reason ...
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...father and mother may downgrade yourself in some aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79725085911 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41250819556 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53264604811 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.062073514 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102207680276 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383013841566 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349720447775 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629416967383 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019524733934 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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