Parents are the best teachers.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

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Parents are the best teachers.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Submitted by Mahhtab on Sun, 09/15/2019 - 12:47

parents play a vital role in our lives. Obviously, parents have powerful influence on the way we learning many lessons from them and its effect is often positive. it seems that they provide children with a suitable source by which they can share their life experiences. The present essay aims to discuss that parents are the best teachers for their own children for at least three main reasons.

first and foremost, parents can be helpful to those people who want to follow their life style. For one thing, kids can get lessons from their experiences. For instance, they can receive these skill as a way to make better decisions. Another thing is that they offer the opportunity of free consultation and guidance. As an illustration,they can get advice on their problems and how to solve it.

In addition,it is often suggested that parents can improve their learning skills. In the first place,training at home with educational tools can expand their creativity. An example may help clarify the point. children who educated a lot in home can usually concentrate on a subject. In the second place,most children pay more attention to lessons when they are in comfortable condition. All in all,parents have to be responsible on what their offsprings obtain from them.

The last but not least,parents seem to know their children better than other people. Doctor lambert,the head of psychology department at Harvard university states that parents are able to know their children abilities and can decide correct teaching methods for them. The latest figures released by National education Assosiaton (NEA) reflect that about 81 percent of children are more successful when they are educated by their parents. In other words,children grow up with their family at early age and they know what is best for them.

In conclusion, it can be stated that parents are best teacher. However, the question is: can parents improve the knowledge and happiness of human beings in general? Only time will tell, but in mean time, parents continue to influence every aspect of everyday life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, another thing, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, for one thing, in other words, in the first place, in the second place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1495601173 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74799305779 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568914956012 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.72298429 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8181818182 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.68181818182 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0700686533542 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255032868906 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252658093949 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476380743147 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202842562988 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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