Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Recently, the phenomenon of children's behavior and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by the majority of society that poor upbringing is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and consequently positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that parents‘ responsibility can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, children's behavior can provide the society with some noticeable effects, which are rooted in the fact that aggressive behaviors, as well as alcoholic parents, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment, which discovered a lack of proper schooling. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both of this burden responsibility and accordingly social capacity apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of educational science, divorce phenomenon might increases the consequences of a tidal wave of crime. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of street crime relate to this reality that the demerits of family support pertain to child responsibility. As a tangible example, some scientific study undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of social networks is correlated negatively with mass media. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of literacy.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of behavior development caused through parents far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of the new generation prove the significance of parent’s trait, but also pinpoint children's character implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82692307692 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39382270373 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7419896694 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135617914576 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424832676282 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469946972307 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07873826671 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543856833137 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 55.0591133005 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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