Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, treatment of the children has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether parents are just responsible for the behavior of the children or not?”, It is a widely held view that parents’ role in nurturing children is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that parents as a backbone of family play a vital role in each society. To put into consideration, I express some reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that pupil’s character is formed under treatment of parents, so those families who have an acceptable knowledge and culture will be able to treat future generation in the best circumstances without any violence and social disorders, and aggressive behavior. Secondly, it can be argued that parents are usually considered as a role model for their children, so their treatment might influence on juveniles. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that many crimes proceed from those families who their parents addicted to alcohol or drugs.
However, there is no doubt that treatment of the children provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that it is not rational to consider parent as the only factor for upbringing individuals, and the educational center must take some of this serious task. Moreover, it is quite clear that there is a strong relationship between parents and schools.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that some educational sessions must be taken into consideration to raise the public awareness of parents. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s, treatment of the children has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21452145215 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9798087528 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.3344673782 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.636363636 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179299320949 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575602331995 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517688879473 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103550173853 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581449085983 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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