Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?
Allowing children to do what they like and meeting all their requirements could have some long-term effects to them to some extent, and I believe this would causes great consequences when they are no longer children. This essay will first discuss the reasons why I do not stand on the side of the opinion and then, it will point out the negative effects on the children.
In my opinion, there are two main reasons for saying that accumulating all the children’s requirements is not highly recommended at all. Firstly, providing a child everything without denial gradually turns him into a person who is selfish and has no respect to others. For instance, a child used to cling to his mother and ask for ridiculously expensive clothes will never appreciate the privileged one. Secondly, such children will not appreciate the efforts that their parents make in earning income for the whole family. As a result, they will be dependents the future by wasting the precious time in pointless activities.
In addition, some consequences of this issue are unavoidable when they are all in their adulthood. This acts from parents could weaken the children’s abilities to adapt to challenging environments without their parents. As an example, a child who is over-rely on computers with Internet connection could not stand even a day without it. Another case is that children growing up without proper guidance and orientation from their parents could involve in illegal activities, which is a great concern.
All in all, excessive pampering is a bad habitat of many parents and it causes great effects on the children. Having a right way to bring up children could turn them into helpful people in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...o some extent, and I believe this would causes great consequences when they are no lon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07042253521 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84081399635 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573943661972 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0253228208 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325168409433 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101692009576 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730069279682 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182706377012 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607900313724 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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